I like this design a lot. I think that you should make sure that the words don't get cut off and go on a different line.
WAAAY TOO MUCH READING
I like this but I think you should include commas cause it blends in
there is a lot to read, and I don't think people would be able to focus. Make something else the focal point to grab people's attention, and have this be the extra stuff to read.
It is not very eye catching
I like the idea, but try to align the font so that the words fit a little better and separate the phrases.
I like this design a lot. I think that you should make sure that the words don't get cut off and go on a different line.
ReplyDeleteWAAAY TOO MUCH READING
ReplyDeleteI like this but I think you should include commas cause it blends in
ReplyDeletethere is a lot to read, and I don't think people would be able to focus. Make something else the focal point to grab people's attention, and have this be the extra stuff to read.
ReplyDeleteIt is not very eye catching
ReplyDeleteI like the idea, but try to align the font so that the words fit a little better and separate the phrases.
ReplyDelete